[Diaspora] Call for Errata

[Mark Delsing]

p. xi, "But the blood the flowed through Lawrence's veins..."
Should be "But the blood that flowed through...."

p.4, "There are no necessary mechanical Consequences of this..."
"Consequences" should possibly not be capitalized since this is  
speaking generally, not about Consequences as in the damage mechanic.

p.9, "by the time the turn comes back to whoever generated it..."
Perhaps should be "back to whomever"?

p.14 "Faster-than-light travel between stars only occur along these  
paths."
Should be "only occurs along".

More to come as I keep reading...